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Far From Dead
« on: June 16, 2013, 01:34:43 am »
Far From Dead




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… “This is as far as I’m going Mr. Holloway.” Jace somberly said as his truck slowed to a halt on the side of the road.


… “I’m not fully sure, but following those train tracks should get you into the city.” Jace said leaning over me and pointed across the empty field to up to some train tracks placed behind a chain link fence. “The governments supposed to got the whole city surrounded, but you can try getting in through the subway.” He said not fully sure of his answer.

I stared down the long vast empty road leading all the way to Tempest City not knowing what’s in store for my journey ahead.  The only info I have is from the news, and everyone knows that the news casters are full of **** and will make up white lies to make a story. An eerie black fog lays above the city scape hiding what sits inside of it, the rest of the country side still have a warm glow from the remaining tip of sun setting behind the hills, but the city seems to be in night time.

I hopped out of the truck and slung my backpack over my shoulder, Jace leaned over to me.

… “Brad, I’m prayin for ya!”

I turned to Jace “I’m not big on the religious stuff, by thanks.” I briefly quipped.

… “Well you got my number, let me know how everything goes, I hope you find Clair.” Jace said with a reinsuring grin.

… “Alright.” I dimly said.

I trekked across the grass field to the train tracks, I looked back at Jace’s truck as he did a U turn and drove off the opposite way, the hum of his truck disappeared and left the still sound of the country side behind him.

I knew there was a lot of danger in store for me, but the idea of a zombie outbreak wasn’t fully getting through to me.

Reports of a deadly virus tearing through Tempest City was casted over the news, an hour later another report came on explaining there was a virus epidemic happening, after that, the news kept pouring in for a full week leading up to a full out zombie pandemic causing the City to collapse, the Government surrounded the city with walls to keep the zombie escaping further into the land.

I climbed the Chain link fence and jumped down to the railroad tracks, I looked out down the tracks and watched the dark orange sun slowly go down, which made me more nervous, I wasn’t too excited to be wandering around the city in the dark. I picked up my feet and followed along the railroad tracks.

I got a letter in the mail today, there was no writing on the front of it, no return address or signature, I opened the blank envelope, inside was a brief handwritten letter “Brad, I need you here, I need your HELP.” Signed “Claire” at the bottom. The letter left dumbfounded at first but then freaked me out shortly after.
Claire was my ex-wife, 6 years together was long enough for us, after that she kicked me out of our home and sent me packing, “apparently I wasn’t good enough for her and had some growing up to do!” Now 4 years later and she’s in Tempest city hanging out with the zombies while I’m in the next county over watching as is all happens.
The strange thing was the I recived the letter 2 weeks after the government sealed the city with all the residents still inside of it, how’d the letter get out?!? I didn’t know what to do, so I tried to ignore the letter, maybe it was a joke, but as the news reports started to slow down I grew more anxious and confused.


I walked for a good few miles through the grassy plains till I caught a lonely home sitting to the side of the railroad tracks. I was curious to see if anyone was living there, since it was so close to the city, I climed back over the chainlike fence surrounding the tracks and trotted to the house, it was a small little cabin with very little features, in the backyard was a clothesline with a full set of clothes on it blowing in the wind, I walked up to the line and looked over the clothing, there were a few floral dresses, a blue jeans and an assortment of T-shirts, but the clothes were not clean, I noticed a few shirts had dried up blood stains on them.

Just then a static noise startled me, it was coming from a small handheld walkie talkie sitting right side up on the picnic table next to me, over the static came a voice, but it was impossible to try making sense of what it was saying, there was too much static and fizzle, I listened to the walkie talkie for a few seconds before the channel went to dead air, I shrugged and walked up to the house, I peeked in the windows, there was one light peering from behind a wall leading into a room. I ran up to the door and knocked and waited for a good minute before knocking again, still nothing.

After that I didn’t hesitate to grab ahold of the door knob to see if I could turn it, it was unlocked so I walked in and asked if anyone was home, of course there was no answer, I cautiously walked down the narrow hallway towards the dim glow of a lamp light coming from a room at the end of the hall.

I left home and got a mile out of town before getting an upset stomach and the jitters, I entered a gas station across the street and walked up to the counter deciding if I wanted to buy a pack of cigarettes to calm my nerves, I was more focused on turning back and going home rather than what cigarettes to get, just then a slim man walked into the store to pay for his gas, as he waited for his change, he noticed me then noticed my full backpack, then my troubled face. He stopped and walked up to me and studied me for a second.

… “Did you come from Tempest?” He questioned almost as if he was afraid to ask.

I shook my head no, he instantly snapped back raising an eyebrow “You going to Tempest?!?!” He questioned again but more strongly.

I nodded with a sigh.


I stopped before the door at the end of the hallway and listened for any sounds, but it was dead silent, I held my breath and peeked around the corner, it was an infant’s room, I scanned the room looking at the cheery wallpaper with clouds shaped as animals, my eyes wandered towards the crib where something caught my eye, without fully entering the room I stood on my tippy toes and peered into the crib.

… “Ahh, Holy **** ****! Nope!” I blurted out while quickly catching the sight of a slightly decapitated toddler, I dashed right for the front door and jumped outside, taking a big breath of air, I walked around to the back yard where the static from the walkie talkie was going on again; the voice was still un recognizable. I held my forehead and looked back towards home, was the fear of what lies ahead starting to sink in, should I just go back home?!?

… “I know this sounds crazy, but something in your eyes feels like this needs to be done, I’ll take you in my truck to the outskirts of the city, that’s all I can do for you kid.”

Jace introduced himself as he drove us down the 2 lane road towards Tempest City, I introduced myself then explained the letter to him, the more I talked about it the more crazy it seemed , and more crazy I seemed for listening to it. But something inside of me felt like I needed to answer it.



TO BE CONTINED!!!!!!!! YEAYYYYY, I KNOW YOU LOVE CHAPTERS SO HERE YUH GO!!!!
« Last Edit: June 22, 2013, 11:02:55 pm by Wetbizket »

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Re: Far From Dead
« Reply #1 on: June 16, 2013, 02:05:00 am »
Dude... That was epic. A slightly decapitated Toddler, that's **** up.
This chapter was perfect, I liked the back story mixed in with the chapter.
I can't wait for the next chapter man, I really can't.

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Re: Far From Dead
« Reply #2 on: June 17, 2013, 10:52:47 am »
Wow this is a grand A bone chiller. I got the feeling I was reading a movie script for Spielberg, and the zombies are set loose in tempest city is this the government trying to clean up their mess or an accidental chemical spill that mutated people into undead groupies? I wanna know more man you got me wandering stuff. The music set the tone for something creepy a foot, the dead have come risen for dinner and we're on the menu lol.

to be honest I don't care for zombies as much but I'm starting to warm up to the flesh crave eating cannibals, that didn't sound right but you get the gist of it and thanks for keeping the horror genre strong on the forums between you and AB's post-apoc it's a nice breath of fresh air from the usual gangster glitz heard what I'm saying.

« Last Edit: June 17, 2013, 11:03:22 am by OGluke »
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Re: Far From Dead
« Reply #3 on: June 17, 2013, 08:10:30 pm »
Well thanks for the comments brozars!!! :o 

Im going to trying mixing in more than zombies, maybe some scavengers and looters running around messing things up, and I will probably add some creey music for each chaper!!! 8)

And your right Luke, Aussie boys post Acpoly stories wet my panties!!!

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Re: Far From Dead
« Reply #4 on: June 17, 2013, 11:22:53 pm »
lol we've always commented on your stories well I try my best to, can't be everywhere at once.

looters and polluters bring em on!

story has a state of decay vibe, strangers in danger.
« Last Edit: June 22, 2013, 04:44:25 pm by OGluke »
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Re: Far From Dead
« Reply #5 on: June 22, 2013, 10:58:13 pm »
I watched the trailer for that game, didnt look to bad for a DLC game, but take your time, you dont have to follow this story religiously, Its mainly a side project I will update everyone once in a while.



Slow Train to Tempest

     I stood at the entrance of the train tunnel going through the hills into the city; the tunnel was barricaded with plys of wood and rebar across the front of the tunnel, I noticed a good hole in the side of the barricade where somebody knocked out, there were chips and broken pieces of wood from where it was hacked at.

I stood on top of the picnic table and scanned over the rolling hills and at the city scape, I didn’t even want to look at the cabin, the image of that poor infant disturbed me to even think of that. I watched the clothes on the line fray as a cool calming breeze of wind blew through the air; I spaced out for a moment and thought about the time I spent with Claire, I did love her, even though things went sour near the end of our relationship, I couldn’t blame her for being upset from my actions, I should have tried to fix my mistakes, but I am a coward. The little Yellow Walkie Talkie buzzed off next to me snapping me out of my trance, I decided to take it along with me, and maybe it would help me in my journey.

     I peeked through the hole in the barrier, all I could see was a dark black endless tunnel with the faint red glow from the lights on the walls, I took a deep breath and entered the tunnel. I hesitantly took a few steps forward into the shadowy darkness and looked ahead, I could see where the tunnel bends, but I have no idea how long this tunnel could be. At a turtles pace I made my way through the train tunnel following the tracks, I cautiously made light steps making sure not to make any loud noises, my head darted around in all directions, I was waiting for something to jump out at me.
But for what seemed like an endless amount of time I final neared the end of the train tunnel, I could see the subway platform up ahead, it was an underground station. I shuffled to the end of the tunnel, the platform was dimly lit, it was hard to see the whole area, which wasn’t that big, I noticed a whole tone of Luggage and boxes scattered on the train platform, I guess people were trying to leave the city from here. I took a few steps out of the tunnel before a person’s shadow jumped up from behind a box, I froze in my place “Oh God!” I whispered to myself.

My heart beat like it was trying to jump out of my skin as the figure stared at me.

The person spoke up “Will….Nancy?!?” The person asked.

I hesitated before speaking up … “N---No, Brad…” I nervously replied.

The figure took a few steps back then ran down the platform, I stood in place, I didn’t know what to do, but before I could even make a decision on what to do, the person came running back but was followed by a group of people, they all stopped and grouped together.

A brute voice echoed through the station “Why don’t you go ahead and put your hands above your head and step into the light for me.”

I did what the man said and stepped forward into the station, the group of people took a good look at me and left the shadows, there was 5 of them, they all had the same look on their faces as I did mine; scared. The man that gave me the order was a tall African American man, middle aged, he was wearing a camo army hat.

… “You said your name was Brad?” He calmly asked and I nodded “Brad, tell us what you are doing down here.” He said putting his hands on his hips.

… “I came through the tunnel, I’m looking for somebody.” I somberly said.

The man stepped to the edge of the platform “Who?” The man simply asked.

… “Claire, Claire Brazing.” I replied.

The group of people talked amongst themselves, I could see them shaking their heads from under the shadows.

… “Sorry Brad, we don’t know here.” He answered.

I jumped in “I’m not from here, I came from the next town over.” I said with my arms still raised above my head.

The group of people started talking amongst themselves again, after a second them man spoke up again “Brad why don’t you join us.” He said, but this time in a friendlier manner.

I followed the group of people down the platform to a small office, we all sat down, the man introduced himself “Brad, I’m John, but everyone calls me JFK, because of my initials.” He said with a slight chuckle. “I know didn’t know who you were looking for, but we are looking for some of our friends, Will and Nancy.” He questioned.

I shook my head “I haven’t seen anybody since I left town.” I said looking down at the dusty floor.

… “Our friends left to see if they could get help about a day ago, we have been trying to make contact with them over this radio but we couldent reach them.” JFK said holding out a little yellow Walkie Talkie.”

My eyes lit up noticing it was the same radio I picked up off the table at the cabin, I reached into my backpack and pulled it out holding it by the antenna letting it dangle for everyone to see.

Everyone sighed “Where did you get that!?!?” JFK shouted.

… “It was laying on a picnic table next to a small cabin.” I said still holding the radio.

JKF put his hand over his mouth “Damn, What they hell are they doing?” he asked himself.

I set the radio down “So can you tell me whats going on here?” I curiously asked.

JKF took a deep breath “Well, just like the new reports said. Fuckin zombie’s man! The whole city went to war against its self and against the zombies, everyday someone is getting shot by damn marauders or killed by the zombies.” He grimly said. “The curbs are lined with dead bodies; cars are torched, homes torn down. It’s pretty much a ghost town, either everyone is dead or in hiding; we’ll all the normal people like us.” JKF explained.

… “But what about the army.” I asked raising an eyebrow.

… “Ha! All they do is stand around a let us get killed, they haven’t done **** except help themselves.” Someone smugly said from the group.

JKF slide his chair forward making the legs of it screech as his moved it closer to me “Brad, why are you risking your life coming here?!” He asked in all seriousness, everyone in the group curiously peer at me.

I pulled out the note from Claire out of my shirt pocket and handed it to JFK, I got this letter from my ex wife about 2 weeks after the outbreak, after the city was barricaded. After sitting around, I had to come here, I have to find her.” I stubbornly said.

JKF grinned “Damn, she must really mean something to you.” He said in a shocked tone.

I scratched the back of my head “Well it’s not just her, but my daughter, Ellia, I haven’t seen her since she was an infant, I haven’t seen Clair since either.” I muttered out.

… “What about you guys, why don’t you leave?” I asked.

… “Its not the easy” JFK quickly snapped back. “We can’t just leave and forget this ****, this is our city, we gotta fight for it, this aint just gonna go away, I’m tellin ya right now, these barricades aint gonna hold them monsters back forever, there might already be some infected outside of these walls as we speak. We gotta hold on to what we got, you know what I’m saying.

Everyone remained quiet “Plus we’re here to keep fools like yourself from walking into this city and getting kill.” JKF barked out while slapping his hands on his knees then gave me a good look “But, with your situation I’m giving you permission to come in my city boi.”

I gave a disgruntled smile “But we can’t help you Brad, we gotta stay here and hold down the fort, but why don’t you stay the night here and head off in the morning, being outside in the night is just plain stupid.” JKF said standing up from his seat “You can use Wills bed over there, and the bathroom is in the next room over.” JKF said.

I thanked him and went to the bathroom, I looked myself over in the dirty mirror “My head was getting shaggy, my facial hair was coming in rough patches, I noticed I still had Claire’s letter balled up in my fist, I slid it into my shirt pocket. My nice new long sleeve button up shirt was brand new; I bought it from the new mall 6 months ago and hung it in the closest where it never moved until today. I played with the dark circles under my eyes for a minute before getting ready for bed; I went back into the office where everyone was getting ready to go to sleep.

An older women kneeled in the middle of the room and everyone stopped what they were doing as she began to say a prayer, surprisingly it wasn’t dark, it made me feel peaceful, I guess she didn’t want to upset or scare anyone. With that in mind I laid in the Cot that was set up in the side of the room and tried to fall asleep.

YEAH DADDY, YOU KNOW THE DRILL! TO BE CONTINUED!1!1!1!1!1!1!1!1!1!1!1!


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Re: Far From Dead
« Reply #6 on: June 23, 2013, 01:15:40 pm »

I'm not religious bro but I've devoted myself to your zombie story for a short spell.

will be reading later tonight
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Re: Far From Dead
« Reply #7 on: June 24, 2013, 11:47:02 pm »
Glorious Exposition! Man I'm digging this story like the graves Brad will be digging for anybody that stands in his way, muhahaha!

This story is just pure gold brother. Keen for the next chapter, I am.

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Re: Far From Dead
« Reply #8 on: June 25, 2013, 02:24:39 pm »
A zombie story, eh?
I LIKE.
Good to see everyone from the old forum is still alive and kickin'!
Rockin' story by the way, Wetbizket! You haven't lost a step!
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« Reply #9 on: June 25, 2013, 06:23:48 pm »
Sticking to the grass roots my friends! 8) I still have fun writing stories and I still have read stories!

Our new story section over here isnt as glorious as the old one on the SR forums but I think were picking up where we left off at pretty well!!!! Plus I was able to salvage some of the Great Reads list before it went bye bye on the SR Forums! :P

 

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